I grew up holding your hands
Oblivious of the surroundings..
My world was confined around you
Obeying your mischievous errands..
I blindly followed you
Though mostly led to trouble..
With you by my side, felt as if
I can win all battle..
We fought, we patched,
We were the worst of foes
And the best of friends..
As I grew, you protected me..
Like a father you cared..
Like friends we shared..
After Dad you silently took his place
And tried to fill the vacuum..
And you still treat me as a child
Forget not, I am myself a mum..
I know I will always be
That little sister for you..
And you will always be
My macho hero, bro..
On this special day
Remembering and longing for you..
May all sisters be blessed with a brother like you..
Happy Rakhi Borda..
Love you and miss you always..
Very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh..
DeleteBeautiful. Beyond words. We never had a girl in our family for the past 60 years. We miss her.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG for your kind words..
DeleteVery beautiful poem...Happy Raksha Bandhan
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Deleteyou fill my eyes with tears...no words.
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This relation is such that it moisten the eyes..Thanks Anonyel for your wonderful words..
DeleteA very beautiful thread of heartfelt words... Happy Raksha Bandhan :)
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ReplyDeleteThanks Magiceye..
DeleteVery beautiful poem of Raksha Bandhan from a sister to her brother.
ReplyDeleteWish you Happy Raksha Bandhan
Thanks SVS..Happy Raksha Bandhan to you too..
DeleteVery nicely written. "After Dad you silently took his place.... "This speaks volumes. Touching.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabyasachi for going through it..
DeleteHeartfelt poem Ranita. Happy Raksh bandhan to you :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ghazala..Happy Raksha Bandhan to you too..
DeleteLike a father you cared..
ReplyDeleteLike friends we shared....such lovely lines.....grt work
happy raksha bandhan :)
Thanks Saikat and Happy Raksha Bandhan to you too..
DeleteGreat words..
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ReplyDeleteLovely....very well penned, Ranita:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchalidi..
DeleteAdorable!
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Deletefirst time here....nice blog!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashok for liking..do keep visiting..
Deletelovely lines..i ditto saikat :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Alka thanks a lot..
DeleteThis is such a beautiful, touching heartfelt poem. You have a gift for words, Ranita.
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nicely written!!
ReplyDeleteMy first time here too as I wanted to thank you for your very nice comment on my blog and for becoming a friend. I have done the same here. Your blog is wonderful and I thought this tribute in words to your brother was sweet and marvelous at the same time. So nice to meet you Ranita and I look forward to coming back.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I have a younger brother who makes fun of my poems but when he came to US for his BS, I wrote a poem for him and he wept after reading it. Your poem reminds me of that. Very touchy!
ReplyDeleteSo cute and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poetry! deeply poured with love!
Best wishes to you and ur brother :)
Too bad here's no like button cause i love it :)
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